Welcome to my A2 Media blog, throughout the course of the blog will be all of the research, planning and publishing of final works throughout my A2 Media course to produce a Music Video
0:05 - a shame the hit on the alarm clock does not match with the opening chord... Is this deliberated?
The editing doesn't seem to be quite on the rhythm - I would expect a video like this to be hitting the beat a little more. Some of the shots could do with being a little more tightly editing (although the framing is good).
I'm assuming the cuts to black are where you need to put additional footage.
Obviously, you've only done 1/4 of the video, so it's hard to make a judgement. I think that if the editing is tightened up and (assuming that) the rest of the footage is of this quality, you should get into L4. However, you need to make sure that the narrative hangs together and that you have the range of shots you need (there is a lack of longer shots, for obvious reasons). If you manage to get some more done on this over the week, e-mail me and I will take a look.
0:00 - I like the opening
ReplyDelete0:05 - a shame the hit on the alarm clock does not match with the opening chord... Is this deliberated?
The editing doesn't seem to be quite on the rhythm - I would expect a video like this to be hitting the beat a little more. Some of the shots could do with being a little more tightly editing (although the framing is good).
I'm assuming the cuts to black are where you need to put additional footage.
Obviously, you've only done 1/4 of the video, so it's hard to make a judgement. I think that if the editing is tightened up and (assuming that) the rest of the footage is of this quality, you should get into L4. However, you need to make sure that the narrative hangs together and that you have the range of shots you need (there is a lack of longer shots, for obvious reasons). If you manage to get some more done on this over the week, e-mail me and I will take a look.